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Earlier versions of the story

Cara’s story changes as the game grows. This page keeps what came before, as it was written, so nothing is lost.

The original storyThe second versionThe third versionChapter Six, first versionChapter Eight, first versionThe first Cara

The original story (until 12 September 2026)

In the first version, Cara’s mother, Dr Isabel Holloway, died in the Río Calmo flood in August 2013, and the Sun Stones campaign ended at her grave in Oaxaca. In the current story she is missing, for days rather than years, and Cara is following the pages she left.

Background, as first written

Her summary ended: “…and now works alone or nearly alone, finishing the survey her mother never got to finish: the search for a temple where a river vanishes underground.”

Her mother, as first written

Dr Isabel HollowayMother, 1968–2013Epigrapher, from Santa Fe; twenty seasons in Mexico and Guatemala. Her notebooks are the reason Cara is in this valley. Cara talks to her, sometimes, when the camera is off.

When Benny, Nkechi or Wren took the field leg, they called her “Isabel”.

The second version (12 to 17 September 2026): missing for two years

In the second version her mother had been missing for two years when the game began: the flood was in August 2024, the search lasted three weeks, and the Sun Stones campaign ran from the valley, through a Christmas on Tryfan, to an empty grave in Oaxaca three years on. In the third version (below) the flood was days ago, the whole campaign was seventeen days, Tryfan became a winter prequel, and the last chapter became a meeting.

The page at survey marker IH-0 (then Chapter Six) was the first-version text with a date under it: “14.ix.2024. A month after the flood.” Cara left a candle in a jar, a photograph of the three of them on Tryfan, and a page of her own: “I found the stair. I am looking. C.”

Marchetti’s ledger (then Chapter Seven): “RC-7, stela, Selva Alta, private source, August 2024, 40,000”, and on the last page, in pencil, 2026: “Calmo notebooks, vols. 13–15. Approached the owner. Declined. Owner is the author.”

The stone in Oaxaca (then Chapter Eight): “Isabel Ward Holloway, 1968–2024, epigrafista. The family put it up this spring, when a court said what the river never had; there is nobody under it. And tonight, in fresh chalk on the kerb, three circles and the word sol, in a hand she has read all her life.” The campaign ended: “In the morning there was a marigold between its pages that nobody in the house had put there.”

Idris stopped her going into the flooded cave on the ninth night of that search, and she did not speak to him for a month.

The third version (17 to 20 September 2026): missing for days

In the third version her mother had been missing for days: a flash flood took her camp on the Río Calmo on the night of Friday 16 October 2026, the search found only her notebooks, and Cara followed the last page for seventeen days to find her alive in Oaxaca, in hiding from a collector who had come for her notebooks. In the current story, The Unfinished Page, nobody is missing: the rains close her mother’s twentieth season as they do every year, the last page of volume twelve is a riddle her mother saved for her, and the collector is a rival with a parasol. The places, the chapters and the dates are the same.

The cache in the Drowned Court (Chapter Two): “Cara. If you are reading this you came down the stair, which means you ignored Benny, which is fair. The boat is on the bed. Drain it, photograph it, leave it. Then go up the outflow and do not swim it. Marchetti’s people have been around the camp asking about RC-7: if it goes, it goes through San Aurelio, and the Institute there closes at six. Love you. Onwards. Mom.”

The page at survey marker IH-0 (Chapter Five), dated the morning after the flood: “Cara. I am out of the river and I am all right. They came for the notebooks the night the water came, and I let the river have the tent and kept walking. Tell Benny and nobody else until it is done. Marchetti’s ledger will tell you why; it is at the house on the lake, and Nkechi will know how. Then come to Doña Rosa’s for the second. Kettle on. Mom.” Cara left a page of her own: “I found the stair. I am coming. C.” No candle: candles were for people who were not coming back.

Marchetti’s ledger (Chapter Six): “RC-7, stela, upper register, Selva Alta, private source, 19 October 2026, 40,000”, three days after the flood, and on the last page, in pencil, dated the fifth of October: “Calmo notebooks, vols. 13–15. Approached the owner. Declined. Owner is the author.” The ledger went to a lawyer, and he was arrested in Milan on the morning of the second of November.

Oaxaca (Chapter Seven) ended with her mother on the kerb of Abuelo’s stone, the reunion with the team and the dawn (those are in the current story too), and the line “nobody has to stay dead any more”. Idris had stopped Cara going into the flooded cave on the second night of the search, and she had not forgiven him.

The pitch for the phone call in this version was her fear: “Only the line can keep her brave.” The three feelings were Nerve, Inspiration and Trust; they are still there, and each now has the name of its best state too: Confidence, Spark and Bond.

Chapter Six: Río Calmo, first version

The start. Spring, the Selva Alta, the river her mother died in. Benny has driven her to the end of the track and will go no further, which is fair. Read his note, find what is left of the 2013 camp on the terrace, cross the river on the stepping stones, climb down into the cenote to the shelf where the last survey marker is, read the page her mother left in it, and leave something of her own.

The old camp. Four tent pegs in a rectangle, a stove gone to rust, a drone battery case with the lid off. Isabel Holloway’s survey camp, August 2013. The river came through it at night, three metres deep, and took the tent with her in it. Cara was on the ridge with the drone batteries. She has never been here.

The page at survey marker IH-0, undated in this version:

“Cara. If you are reading this you came down the ledges, which means you are a better climber than I was at your age and worse at listening. The stair is real. The court is real. Finish it if you want to; do not finish it for me. Kettle on. Mom.”

Her journal. “A film canister taped under the marker, and a page folded eight times, dry after twelve years. ‘Finish it if you want to; do not finish it for me. Kettle on. Mom.’ I read it twice and then I read it to Base, because somebody else should hear it in her words once. Then I put it back for the next reader.”

The end. A candle in a jar, a photograph, and the page back in its canister for the next reader. “Survey marker zero, on a shelf above green water, with a page in a film canister that had waited twelve years for exactly one reader. She left a candle in a jar and a photograph. Benny had the kettle on at the truck and did not ask.”

Chapter Eight: Oaxaca, first version

The start. The second of November, after dark, in the village in the Valley of Oaxaca where her mother worked for twenty seasons and is buried. Doña Rosa ran the field house and has been Abuela to Cara since she was six; her ofrenda has a gap in it. Read Abuela’s letter, gather what the altar needs from the town (marigolds, bread, mezcal, salt, copal and a photograph), hear the bells at the church, find her mother’s grave in the panteón, and put the notebook on the ofrenda where it belongs.

The grave. A white grave under a marigold arch with candles on it and a cousin’s photograph: Isabel Ward Holloway, 1968–2013, epigrafista. Somebody has written under it in chalk, tonight: “te encontraron”. They found you. She sits down on the kerb of it and does not say anything for a while, and the phone is warm in her hand.

Her journal. “Isabel Ward Holloway, 1968–2013, epigrafista, under a marigold arch with candles on it, and in chalk, tonight, in a cousin’s hand: te encontraron. They found you. I sat on the kerb of it with the phone warm in my hand and Base breathing on the other end of it, which turns out to be the thing I came for, and I took the photograph off the grave because it belongs with the food.”

The end of the campaign. “The notebook on the altar between the marigolds and the photograph, the last page open, the candles doing what candles do. Abuela said ‘ya’, which means everything. The stela is going home in the summer. The Sun Stones were the plot. This was the rest of it.”

The first Cara

The first Cara was British, from Bristol, with a dark plait over her right shoulder. When she became American, with a short blonde bob, that look and that voice became a character of their own: Dr Wren Ashcroft, Cara’s rope partner, who is playable in every chapter.

Dr Wren Ashcroft: the first Cara’s look